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Heehee have fun you two? by Bread-Crumbz Heehee have fun you two? by Bread-Crumbz
Everyone relax, they are kissing. Nothing more

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I looked long and hard at my friends. They were my best friends. Truly they were. However, my love for Fluttershy was greater than the way I felt about my friends. So if they shunned us for this, then fine. We still had Pinkie on our side, anyway. I slammed my hooves into the water, making the 3 flinch and I finally spoke.

"Fluttershy and I are more than just friends." I said, narrowing my eyes at them. They remained silent. Applejack knew, but she wanted to hear it from the pony's mouth.

"Yeah, we're together. We're a couple. The both of us." I knew everypony in the area was watching me. Watching us. But I didn't care. I felt even stronger with her there. However, out of the corner of my eye, I could see her lowering herself into the water more, as Pinkie tried to be there to comfort her.

Rarity opened her mouth to speak. "Rainbow Dash, Darling, we don't judge you for that!" she said, her voice carrying a high note at the end. I tilted my head, confused.

Twilight nodded. "Yeah Rainbow, you're our friend! We don't care who you date, or who you love!" she was smiling when she said this, but her smile fell. "The only problem is..if you two break up-"

I cut her off. "Like I told Applejack, don't worry about it!"

Twilight glared at me, her voice hiring. "Let me finish, Rainbow! As I said, if you two break up, our whole gang will break up as well!"

Applejack nodded. "That's what ah meant, Sugarcube! If you two broke up, then what would we do? We'd either lose one, or both of ya'll! The group would be torn apart because of your break up."

My ears lowered as well, and I could tell my face contorted into fear. Oh Celestia, she was right. But the thought of me leaving her. Of us breaking up, send a cold chill through my body. It felt like my organs would shut down at the very thought.

"That's not going to happen. Because.." I gulped. "Because Fluttershy and I will not be breaking up." I said this loudly, and proudly. I didn't care if the whole park heard. They needed to know how I felt. She did as well.

Out of the corner of my eye, I could see her slowly rising above water, looking at me. Her eyes blinked curiously as I turned to face her, giving her a bright smile. I flew over to her and placed my wing around her comfortingly. "I will not break up with her. We are going to make this work. For ourselves, and for our friendship...And we want you all to support this. Okay?"

I could feel Fluttershy welcoming this affection, even if it was a public display of it. She rested her head on my shoulder and I sighed contently. We watched the others and how they would react. Of course, Pinkie flipped.

"Yahoo! See! I told everypony, didn't I?! You guys are really perfect!" she hopped around the water, splashing all of us. Rarity whined in protest at getting wet.

"Yes yes, of course we will support you! If you think this will work, then...who are we to break up a happy couple??" she shouted with a smile.

Twilight and Applejack looked at eachother, before giving in and smiling at us too.

"Aw shucks, Rainbow, Ah didn't know ya'll truly felt that strongly. Of course we will support ya'll."

Twilight nodded, swimming over to us. "I think we should celebrate!" she took out her notebook and pencil, jotting down notes. "And for me, celebrating is calculating the speed of the slide I just rode~"

Applejack hopped over to her, knocking the notebook and pencil into the water, much to a very displeased Twilight. "Ah say last one to the Dragon Drench is a rotten apple!" she whooped, before hopping out of the pool.

Twilight groaned, getting up beside Rarity. But they both trotted after them, their noses in the air. However, they both gave us a smile before disappearing after Applejack.

Pinkie hopped out of the pool too, cheering and squealing. "Woohoo! The Dragon Drench! That's the best waterslide here! Come on you slow ponies!" she called to us.

I sat there a few moments with Fluttershy, smiling down at her. "You wanna just stay here? Swim a bit?" I asked.

She shook her head, pulling away from me to get out of the water. "You wanna be a rotten apple?" she asked me, grinning slyly.

I sat there a few seconds before, shooting out of the water. "Aha! Yeah right! It's gonna be you who is!" Despite this, we both trotted together to follow Applejack to the slide.


Today was amazing. My friends knew about us, and accepted it! Not only that, Fluttershy didn't hate my public display of love for her. And if she did, she certainly didn't show it. We had a wonderful time riding the slides, eating various treats, and joking around. I think after I stopped being so stubborn and opening up a bit more to everypony, they didn't get so defensive. I should learn how to tone down my cocky attitude.

Or maybe not.

As the park began to close, we headed out to a bus this time instead. It would get us back quicker. The bus waited at the park for everypony to board, making their way back to wherever they were from.

Rarity, Twilight, Pinkie, and Applejack were walking ahead of us, as we only walked a few feet behind. I remembered what Applejack said, and Fluttershy and I made sure to include them in our conversations and they did the same. It was so much easier now that everypony knew. I couldn't be happier!

"Alright, everypony!" said Twilight. "The bus will be here in 20 minutes. We should get out there and wait first. So we can get good seats!" she said.

Applejack nodded. "Yeah. Ah'm pretty tuckered out from today. It'll be nice to rest my hooves." she said, rubbing them against the ground in an attempt to massage them.

Rarity stuck her nose in the air, feeling simply disgusted with herself. Her beautifully curled hair was now hanging down around her shoulders. Stringy and wet from the events from today. "I simply can't believe I let you ponies drag me onto those waterslides. My once perfectly curled hair is now a mess." she whined.

Applejack was the first to speak up. "Aw shucks, Rarity. Ya'll had a blast today. Can't ya just accept it? 'Sides, you can shower when ya get home."

Rarity stuck her tongue out at Applejack. "Hmph! Unlike some ponies, I take great pride in my appearance!" she said coyly to Applejack again, now grinning.

Pinkie Pie still had as much energy as ever, hopping around all of us as we sat in tired heaps at the bus stop. "Ooh! I'm still all wound up from today!" she said, giggle snorting. Suddenly however, she stopped, a loud rumble could be heard among us. We all turned to Pinkie to see her face have a look of surprise.

"Oh..guess I'm hungry!" she said, before laughing. We all joined in.

"Yeah, I guess I'm hungry too...anypony volunteer to grab us a vegidog before boarding the bus?"

We were all silent, avoiding eye contact, before surprisingly, Fluttershy spoke up. "Rainbow Dash and I can get them." she said.

I looked over at her, and rolled my eyes. I didn't feel like moving much either. But Fluttershy looked at me, insisting I go. My ears perked up and I nodded eagerly. "Yeah, yeah we'll go!"

The others sighed in relief, happily handing us their bits to pay for the food with. "Thanks so much, you two. Hurry back!" said Twilight. We nodded, and went off to the stand together


I assumed the worst. She wanted to lecture me about speaking so loudly about us infront of everypony else. Or maybe it was because I was on the slides too much today and didn't talk to her a lot. All I knew was this could be good, or bad.

As we arrived at the vegidog stand, I took out the bits, counting them. "Well let's see. We have enough to give each Pony a vegidog and-" and in that instant, I felt Fluttershy practically pushing me behind the stand, without the prying eyes of the last few ponies leaving to see. She pushed me against the wall and I felt her lips attack mine, and her tongue invade my mouth. My eyes shot open. This was not what I expected. Not in the least.

I felt her push me on the ground now and we sat, and she wrapped her back legs around my waist, still kissing me passionately. She had done stuff like this before, but never this much. She always said kissing wasn't her thing. Well tonight she sure showed me wrong. Finally, after a few minutes of this, she pulled away.

"Rainbow Dash..what you said today. About never wanting to leave me...." she was only a few millimeters away from my lips, and it felt as though she would spring on them anytime. "It made me feel so special..." she buried her head under my chin, squeezing me tightly.

I was stunned. How could she not think I already found her special. I smiled, squeezing her back. "Well, are a very special pony to me. You know that, don't you?" I whispered tenderly.

She nodded, and made a small whimper. "I love you, Rainbow Dash..."

I kissed her on the forehead, then trailed my kisses down to her neck before answering. "And I love you, Fluttershy."

She gave me one more kiss on the lips before pulling herself away. We bought the vegidogs and brought them back to the girls. At first, their faces lit up at the sight of their food, then they fell, looking almost shocked, before breaking into fits of laughter.

"No wonder why it took you both so long to get our vegidogs" giggled Twilight.

Applejack chuckled as well. "Heehee, have fun you two?" she asked.

Pinkie tilted her head, already shoving her vegidog in her mouth. "What? I don't get it!" she complained.

It took us both a minute to realize, but our manes were a mess. They were tangled and it looked like somepony's hooves were playing in them. We both giggled shyly, and as we did, the bus for home arrived.

We sat next to eachother on the way home. As she fell asleep on my shoulder, I looked out the window at the night sky. Today was one of the best days of my life I think. Nothing would top this. Not even joining the Wonderbolts. Nothing would be as perfect as today was.

I wish it would stay like this forever.
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TheBaconator5000 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  New Deviant Professional Digital Artist
mousedapple3300 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016
uuummmmmmmmmmm . . .
Larinda101 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2016  New Deviant
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh meh gowd
BladeSlash Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2016  Student Writer
While I wonder how this came up when I searched up your gonna have a bad time, it turned out to be a happy accident. This opened me up more to RainbowShy/FlutterDash. Good story and art.
GymnastixJenny Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015
you there! stop being adorable! Stop it right now! :angry:
It is illegal for you to be this cute!
RainbowFlash5000 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Dang, Fluttershy sure is a daring :3
RDash13 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i'll tell ou one that picture, my dear, is a HUGE typo.
Redfierykitteh Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015   Filmographer
You wanna see a typo? Look at the way you said "you."
XxGior10xX Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Photographer
Oh my, this is awesome, I love this shipping.
Morris4480 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
I'm so happy about the reactions and how they excepted their love for eachover :'3

ah know she ain't the mane character but ah love AJ in this fic :D
EstevesAqui Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
I think this one is my favorite chapter, it's so cute and I can't stop smiling while i'm reading it.
TheDiscordedBrony Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
nice pic love the story *favs*
CrysticMystic Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for making me like mlp :D
also, what are bits? coins?
Morris4480 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Ye, they're coins
SHADOWDARK6662012 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwww is so beautiful ^w^
monkeyhero0 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconwhatthefuckplz: Nice I guess
EstevesAqui Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
I just can't stop smilling, this is awesome. You are a realy good writer :D And I fucking love FlutterDash!
RainbowDash420 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
good clop ; or Feudal Era terms is "Ye"
Emerald-Flash Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So.. u like Flutterdash? ( ^-^)
Chibijoshua Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That hot dog doesn't have enough Relish on it. : o

Although I'm sure much more people Relish this piece of art.
amandaam Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YellowpawTeh200th Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Dattebayo681 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Damn it, well, now I have diabetes. :iconsobeautifulplz:
fanime1 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
I love how Fluttershy's leg go around Dashie. So cute! And I love the style of your work. It has an innocence to it.
fanime1 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
I meant legs. Sorry.
fearthedark123 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Mmmm... damn... look at that... ohh yeah... damn that looks good.... man I wish I have that hot dog in the poster on the wall behind them...damn
ThahRadical Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't like this shipping but I like this for some reason. <3
Rainbowdash2Pony Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :iconloveloveplz:
r3inb0w-dash Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Miles002 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
dawww :3
broz4ever Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
i looked up ponies eating eachother (i know i'm sick) i expected pictures from cupcakes XD
sokom64 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Bump! XD
PancakeTurtle Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Artist
Tyruas Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jbrenham Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
This is such a sweet story so far. I look forward to continue reading tomorrow.
Doodler64 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
TheRyanLikesArt Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MoralShifter Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
And we shall watch.
Fallenpeach Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is just too precious. :heart:
Insanity-Ensues Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012

I actually squeaked. *blush*
LunaFan100 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
i find it weird that my 2 favorite characters are secretly dating each otha but i like it
Wait0wat Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
Oh, thnx. Cause I thought their tongues in each others mouths ment nothing at all. LOL
BetaBrothers Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I threw away my pencil when I saw this.
YukiMKitty-chan Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Ah~ this was just so cute and romantic and pulsating every moment! :iconwingbonerplz:
Dragunlord13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012

Its sooo good....

But i can tel..
ittl haevtoend..

ZaneFur Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
Boom. My heart has exploded. :U
Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh no!!!
cutetoboe Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Here! Let me take you to the doctor!
SilverBlazeBrony Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw man, I'm loving this story! this is the first fanfic I've ever read, and to be honest I don't know if any other will be able to top it! You have an amazing talent. :3
shilvicthehedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Student Artist
Best chapter ever.!!
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