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"I love you..." I whispered in Fluttershy's ear.

It was quiet for a few moments, and I began to grow nervous. Was she not ready for the L word yet? My ears lowered and I shut my eyes, before I felt a kiss on my lips. My eyes opened to see her cyan eyes, blinking at me as she pulled away from the kiss.

"I love you too, Dashie..." she smiled, resting against my chest. My heart must have been racing a million times a minute. And she could hear it. She could hear my heart beat for her.

I held her closely, and we didn't say a word for a while. Instead we just talked, about everything deep. Religion, politics, our pasts. Everything I hadn't known about her we talked about. Her goals, her dreams. She wanted to be a Vet and take care of as many animals as she could. I told her she'd be great.

I steered clear of the subject of the Wonderbolts.

Eventually I felt my eyes shut but we still talked. Eventually we began to play games.

~~~

"Okay...would you rather do Discord's laundry for a year? Or have a sleepover every night at Pinkie's for a year...and you know how Pinkie is." I asked jokingly to her.

Fluttershy burst into laughter. "Oh man that's a toughy...maybe the laundry. I wouldn't have the energy for a sleepover every day of the year with Pinkie..."

I chuckled and nuzzled into her head. "Oh yeah...I know I don't think I could handle that either.." I was practically falling asleep.

Fluttershy continued to lay on my chest, as I opened my eyes for a brief moment to see the night sky that I worked so hard to make for her. She was facing the wrong way. I gently nuzzled her head, urging her to wake up.

"Fluttershy...face the other way. Look.." I suggested.

She rolled over and looked outside. Despite not being full, the moon it was still bright, illuminating the entire room in it's pale light.

I looked down at her. She was so perfect, her pink mane seemed to flow around us, like a river in the moonlight. I couldn't believe this flawless mare was mine...

"Fluttershy...I meant what I said."

"What?"

"That I love you..."

She nodded, snuggling into my chest. "I know...I could tell...and I meant it as well."

I just needed to hear that, I could be content to hear that tonight. But no, she made it ten times better.

"I think...I'm falling inlove with you...Rainbow Dash.." she whispered.

I wanted to just shoot up like a rocket, I couldn't believe she said that to me...first..on her own free will.

"aha....Fluttershy....really...? You...think you're falling inlove with me...?" I put my hoof under her chin, and gently lifted her face to meet mine.


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She bit her bottom lip, batting her cyan eyes before nodding.

"Yes..Rainbow Dash..I am."

I smiled as wide as I possibly could and pulled her into a deep passionate kiss...

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And I think you guys can figure out the rest for yourselves :iconteheplz:
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*slyfurrieartist 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
:b I'm so happy for RD and FS!!!! They should make this a real series of my little pony. (For the older kids :) )
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*slyfurrieartist 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
:b I'm so happy for RD and FS!!!! They should make this a real series of my little pony. (For the older kids :))
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Mood: Love ~amandaam Apr 13, 2013  Student Artist
i love love this story!!!!!
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~HighPrincess Mar 29, 2013   Digital Artist
Do you mind if I can use this for the preview picture of the fanfic I'm writing? You'll get credit for the photo, I may make some edits to the photo, if you don't want me to use it, I'll understand.

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Adorable photo and amazing literature! :squee:
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~Bread-Crumbz Apr 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
sorry this is such a late reply! you can if you havent gotten one by now! :)
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~HighPrincess Apr 8, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you! I used it here: [link]

I am not good in literature. :iconcryingplz:
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you my friend are a turd.... lol leaving us out here to hang and dry in our dirty thoughts... you monster... but anyway.. good work i enjoyed every single work and i am going to put the whole thing on a word document so one of my friends can read it because they dont have a computer...
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*SkyBrushThePegasus Nov 9, 2012  Student Artist
is the picture digital art or did you draw/paint it?
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~Bread-Crumbz Nov 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Digitally painted :>
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