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I think it started a day after we got that dragon out of ponyville....yes I think that's when it all began for me. For us. I know I was really impatient with her and I was actually annoyed with her. She constantly hid away from any challenge and slowed us down. Listening to her little 'eeps' really got on my nerves. I tried to tell Twilight she should have just stayed back in Ponyville. She was useless to us on this journey. All that changed when I saw how she stood up to the dragon. How in that situation she was able to face her fears. She gained so much more respect from me since then...

But you want to hear about how it happened, huh? Well I was on my way to her house. I was going to apologize. For being such an insensitive jerk. I didn't mean to be, I really didn't. Sometimes things'd slip out before I could censor it. There was nothing I could do really except go with it. And why not? I was Rainbow Dash. I didn't let anything stifle my confidence.

As I arrived I knocked on her door. After waiting a few seconds for a response I peered into her window. Her house seemed empty except for a few raccoons sleeping on her couch. "Fluttershy?" I called out to her, a bit concerned to why she wasn't inside. I flew over to the back to see she was near her little Bunny..Angel or whatever it's name was little house. I hovered in the air getting her attention as she seemed busy cleaning up around the area. "Fluttershy!" I exclaimed. Then she did that thing that annoyed me. She squealed and flinched before looking up at noticing me. I couldn't help but make a frustrated expression. She merely lowered her head, but greeted me anyway. "O-oh..hey Rainbow.."

Why was she talking to me like that...? Then I realized I probably looked angry. I softened my expression and landed a few feet away from her. "Hey, Fluttershy!" I felt myself smile nervously at her. I hadn't actually spent time alone with her before. Sure we hung out with the gang, and I even knew her in flight school back in Cloudsdale. But we were never friends then. Fluttershy blinked a few times, her pink hair covering her eyes. Something about the way she blinked, or the way part of her mane covered her one eye caused something in my heart to leap.

"I just wanted to, ya know, come over to say sorry." I said, walking a bit closer to her. She remained aloof, but courteous and polite nonetheless.
"What do you mean, Rainbow Dash?" she asked in that meek, quiet voice.
"I was a total asshat to you yesterday and I feel bad. I just wanted to come over and say I'm sorry." phew. That was easier than I thought. I kept the smile on my face, but felt my cheeks burn. Was I blushing?
"I mean it was totally awesome the way you handled that dragon! You showed me more courage than I had ever seen..I just wanted to congratulate you for that.." I said, tilting my head to the ground.

This suddenly got her attention as I noticed her look over at me. "O-oh! You really think so...?" when I had looked at her I noticed she was a tad pink as well, this made my face flush even more. At least it felt like it.

"Y-yeah of course I do! Fluttershy the dragonslayer!" I said, flashing her a big smile.

Fluttershy giggled and averted her eyes. My heart leaped again. "Ahaha...I wouldn't go that far." it seemed she had warmed up a bit.

Things got quiet again. None of us had said anything in the last few seconds and she continued to pick up around Angel's small house. "W-well Rainbow Dash it was nice that you stopped by..but I'm glad you did. I have chores to do and I would hate to bore you..." and I knew Fluttershy wasn't actually politely kicking me out. I may not know her as well as I ought to, but I know that she is being sincere. My brain was beginning to get too jumbled to stay anyway.
"Yeah!" I exclaimed. "See you around!" and I was gone in a Dash.

As I was flying, all these thoughts, all these...emotions were going through my mind at once. What was all that about and why was all this happening? I just went to say sorry. Was it because I swallowed my pride and knocked myself down a few pegs to be a good friend?

Yes that's what it was.

I'm certain it was because I was trying to be a good friend.

Friend.



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:iconthebigm585:
TheBigM585 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
so.... awesome...
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amandaam Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Awesome!
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Ano170 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
So I've suddenly decided to go back and reread this story from the start (or at least, the happy chapters...). It's interesting just seeing how far your artwork has come along since then, in addition to your writing. :)
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Dattebayo681 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The characters have the same mannerisms as their show-counterparts: something MANY fabrics fail horribly at.
I love this series. :icondashawesomefaceplz:
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redwallfvs Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Student General Artist
YUS. ^^
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r3inb0w-dash Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
wow.... you have a true talent...
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honest-optimist Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
wow. loving these little story segments. you should definately do more
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:iconbread-crumbz:
Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I am~ :)
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doubledashie Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
So many bad puns XD But cute nonetheless
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kellyvshea Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
soooooo cuet
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13lovemillion Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"asshat" pfft, that (already very silly) word, plus reading this in RD's voice... equals cracking up at 2:14 and almost waking everyone up. oh my lord, imagine if they put that in the show!

of course they can't, they are still a couple kids who watch it... but it'd be funny
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Dattebayo681 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Should've said "flankhat". B)
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jarenthx Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
seems to draw great oil painting very god
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Brony2 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMG, RD cursed
that is not something u see usually in a RD shipping fic
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shilvicthehedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student Artist
Dork,you are in love.
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UnicornButtCupcake Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
How come evryone can draw Fluttershy's hair so epic yet so simple!
Gawd, I have to have a ref sheet near when drawing her!
She's more of a pain in the ass than Rarity's coiffure!
Still, it's lovely!
Also, ... Can anyone make me a ref sheet for her?
I just draw by memory ... Yeah
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Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aw thanks! Pony hair is the hardest for me because it's so unique and if it's a bit off it doesnt look right

Rarity is a challenge for me but I'm getting better :,3
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UnicornButtCupcake Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lawl, I have no idea why, but Rarity was super duper easy for me :3
I bet yu'll get better!
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YukiMKitty-chan Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
love the art and~ dawwww dashie has a crush and she doesn't know~<3
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Fallenpeach Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Very nice ^-^ Love the art as well! The way you shade is very pretty c:
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RaenBoow Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, just friends :V
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JPL-Animation Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Professional Filmographer
aaawww... fluttershy.. :love:
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5oclockshadow Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
I don't usually read MLP fanfiction, but when I do - it's yours. <3
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Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
aaaaa thank you so much!! ;.;
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Starbat Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see what you did there. :)
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UnicornButtCupcake Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, yes!
If yu know hat I mean...
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BrunDeign Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
I like the art style a whole lot, and you make Dash look super-cute with her bashfulness. Although I'm a firm supporter of FlutterMac, I appreciate the art. :P
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Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ahh thank you so much though! I'm glad you like the art <:3
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Neutralbrony Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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This turning out good. I love the whole visualization with the story in the description. I adds such a dramatic effect to it!
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Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much, Neutral! I figured it'd make visualization much easier!
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Danupert Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
Wingboners, all day every day
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Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
LOL oh you know it
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8loodyrain Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconohyouplz:
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bobtehnoob-1337 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, you.
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Bioshock140 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
Such a sweet picture.

--
Ponies, my anti-drug.
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:iconbread-crumbz:
Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank yooouuu
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Bioshock140 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
You're welcome.

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Ponies, my anti-drug.
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JerseyLightning Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
OGOD MY HERT. ;A;
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:iconbread-crumbz:
Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
GET READY FOR MORE
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zaiali Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
and then they had sex.
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:iconbread-crumbz:
Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
DONT SPOIL IT lmao
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Thehappytyler Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
This was beautifully well done! The detail, the colors, the blushes, the all breath taking amount of detail of this art work! No wonder why this got featured on EQD, you deserve it! :D

And I like that you used Flutterdash in this art, you really made them stand out in this with the adorable expressions that make me go HNNG. xD
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Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Omg it got featured on EQD?? I didn't know that *A* what an honor!

And thank you so much!
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WiseSilence Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
totally just read that in Zoidberg's voice (\/) (;,,;) (\/)

Beautiful story, Beautiful art!
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TheSkitzoGamer Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YES...
FRIEND....
JUST...
FRIENDS....
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Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yes..

for now
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TheSkitzoGamer Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Listen. Hear that? Yeah, that's the thousands of colts and stallions crying out in despair in unison... why are you doing this to us... them!
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dhDingo Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ooooohhhhhh....!!!!!!! 8'D
sadhfkjdslg homfg
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Bread-Crumbz Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
DO U LIEK EET? :,D
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dhDingo Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT A LOT.

this is going to be an awesome fanfic I can feel it now. <3
I see there is more, too >:3 in my inbox.

fffyyeaa
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